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Lee Markison's avatar

Congrats on a captivating first chapter! Can’t wait to tune in every week for each portion of the saga.

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Michael Macfadden's avatar

Thanks Lee!

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Neera Mahajan's avatar

Read chapter 3 first, loved it and then came back to read the first chapter. Loving it. I too have started writing short stories from January this year in 'Neera's Fiction.' You have inspired me to write a novella next. Fingers crossed, I shall do that pretty soon.

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Michael Macfadden's avatar

Thank you so much for reading! Do you have a favorite piece you’ve written so far?

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Neera Mahajan's avatar

All of them are my favorite, I wrote them! Ha Ha! But you can start reading with this one https://neerasfiction.substack.com/p/the-familiar-face-of-fear

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Laurie Macfadden Jones's avatar

Love the first sentence!

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Michael Macfadden's avatar

Thanks Aunt Laurie!

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