A summer warehouse job shows Alex the flaws in the family business—and his brother Tyler’s true colors—setting the stage for a deep sibling rift.
You do such a great job of carrying the story along. You varied the sentence and paragraph lengths in a way that kept me wanting to read with a well-set pace. Do you have any other books I can purchase?
This is my first real attempt at fiction and long form. I have a few children’s books I wrote for my kids, but nothing else in this spirit… yet.
You can check out the kids books for free here: https://mmacfadden.com/books
They’re also on Amazon.
I hope Alex kicks some Tyler butt. Looking good son in law
Thanks father-in-law!
Loving this unfolding story!
Thanks Mike!
You do such a great job of carrying the story along. You varied the sentence and paragraph lengths in a way that kept me wanting to read with a well-set pace. Do you have any other books I can purchase?
This is my first real attempt at fiction and long form. I have a few children’s books I wrote for my kids, but nothing else in this spirit… yet.
You can check out the kids books for free here: https://mmacfadden.com/books
They’re also on Amazon.
I hope Alex kicks some Tyler butt. Looking good son in law
Thanks father-in-law!
Loving this unfolding story!
Thanks Mike!